I was in the midst of reading and enjoying a love making scene between the hero and heroine when this line jolted me out of the story:
"He dipped his tongue between her legs, tasting the salty sweetness of woman."
For some reason I started craving chocolate covered pretzels or potato chips.
Is it just me, or is that line a bit too purple prose? Hot line and all, and what comes afterwards is sizzling but I had to put down the cook and raid my kitchen for something sweet/salty.
Ever read a specific line in a book that made you hungry for no reason other than the description?